Winter (Etheree)

You painted a nice picture of winter, very warm, good job, an enjoyable read.

Wonderful imagery.. :) i could feel the winter chills :)

"An azure blue sky
Wind blowing from the east
Virgin snow under my feet"

^^ the beauty of winter is so beautifully picturised...

keep writing..

Ingrid,

this is such a perfect scene set in this wonderful form that we call Etheree..now cover it in Marzipan and decorate it for christmas, ready to slice into and serve to loved ones in front of a warming log fire.

Well done my friend.

Michael
((hugs))

Nice image and word flow.

I liked this poem. The wording was great. The flow was good through out the poem, it put a nice picture into my mind. I see nothing that needs to be fixed or looked at. I gave it a 5/5.