Ii forgive yu

by paola stephanie   Nov 17, 2008


As we sat on the opposite side of the couch..tearz runnin our face...yu apologizin for what yu did...all ii culd do was look at yu...ii kno we was both young && yu aint kno wat yu was doiin...itz still sitz in the baQ of my mind...but ii still culdnt force myself to sa those 3 wordz yu was waitin for me to say...yu got up && went t yur room && started packin yur clothes..ii asked yu where yu goiin?..yu sed yu aint kno but yu had to go...yu got yur clothes && picked up bag..yu walked to the door...ii looked at yu...yu dropped yur bag && ii ran to yu...we hugged...yu kissed me on my forhead && sed "im sorry sister...ii love yu.."yu walked out..ii walked outside to watch yu walk down the street...ii whispered.."ii forgive yu brother..ii love yu so much...be careful..."..ii prayed to God that yu heared me...

0


Did You Like This Poem?

Latest Comments

  • 12 years ago

    by Marvellous

    Forgiveness, appeals for good health. Within every scar, healing dwells.

  • 12 years ago

    by paola stephanie

    Thank you boo ; )

  • 12 years ago

    by marina14

    That a ssad story but i can realate to it in a way very good i can feel youre emotion you put into it (:

  • 15 years ago

    by KJ

    5/5
    Loved it because it was real and raw with emotion.
    You should write more.

  • 15 years ago

    by ToRn iiN2 PeIcEs

    Wow this is saddddddd
    4 reel
    i like it tho :)

More Poems By paola stephanie