Comments : Trying To Escape Darkness

  • 15 years ago

    by Rolo

    I liked this poem. Each line is dripping with the pain you tried to convey. I'm able to both empathize and sympathize, which made for a personal read. I like the concept of being a puppet and having no control, simple yet it gets your point across effectively. Nicely done. I'm very sorry it took me so long to read. 5/5.

    -Rolo