by Simply Complex Nov 18, 2008
category :
Dark, fantasy /
other
Eager to please |
by isabel
It is quite a deep poem... there are some verses that just take my breath away... |
by Brittany C
The flow seemed a little off to me and the format wasn't the best. Try making the lines closer to the same length that would help the flow out a lot. The wording was ok, there is some room for improvement. I gave it a 4/5. Keep up the good work. |