The flow seemed a little off to me and the format wasn't the best. Try making the lines closer to the same length that would help the flow out a lot. The wording was ok, there is some room for improvement. I gave it a 4/5. Keep up the good work.

It is quite a deep poem... there are some verses that just take my breath away...
(for example: "My entire world is your face" or "Emotions are dangerous"...)

the format could be emproved, the flow is a little bit off, yet it seems like your focus is your feelings instead of formal requirements, so i don't think i ought to judge your poem because of them...

the ending is again extraordinary...
5/5
*isabel*