Its really good you just need to work on the flow a little bit but its really good and the emotion is strong good job

I can relate. But i agree with twistedsoul ^^ the flow is a bit messy. but apart from that it was great. nice work.

This poem is very vague , simple , and open . It could use some embelishing , since free verse poems need to work a little harder to make an impact . Nice use of repetition though , 5/5 .