I liked this poem. It's makes a sad story. It is a true poem because it is proven that people who do that most likely went through it at some point. The wording and everything else about this poem was great. "donâ??t" you should fix that it does take away from the poem a little. I gave it a 5/5.

Woahh.

damn, your good at this stuff.

pretty deep.
hope yu get top marks for it.

i give it 5/5 anyway!

luv yu
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