Agonizing Peace

by PassionCourageTriumph   Nov 18, 2008


So many feelings,
All at once.
Yet blank.
NOTHING.
No sound.
No movement.
Screaming from the inside.
Every single sense,
Humming.
My mind is a place where
Silence is chaos,
And there is
Madness in tranquility.
PAIN.
All sensation hitting a blunt dead end,
Stabbing into every inch of my soul.
What to think?
I must figure it out.
No.
I don't care.
Bitter and Sweet.
Happy and Sad.
Again,
Nothing.
Tears Flowing.
Each screaming with anguish from inside.
Each falling as quiet as the the first,
And the last.
A monster within myself,
Ripping,
Gashing,
Clawing,
Wanting to scream out.
SILENCED.
Anger and Frustration.
Confusion and Love.
Lips about to speak those unremitting words full of feeling.
About to release the painful burden.
Nothing more than a whimper escapes.
Once again,
AGONIZING.
PEACE.

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  • 15 years ago

    by Saving Grace

    Woww! This was moving and deep. Your poems are so incredibly discriptive and i love that! I started reading this write and it truly dragged me into it and i couldnt stop reading it. I wish there was more. It was really a stunning piece. Nice work as always. 5/5

  • 15 years ago

    by Cara

    What an interesting way to write.. i really liked it. Not the sort of thing that i see all the time and i did like it.
    you portrayed pain and sadness extremely well.
    one thing,
    What to think.

    ^^ maybe, What to think?
    with a question mark? i know its only a little thing.. but :)

    well done :)

  • 16 years ago

    by Jim McMillen the man within

    Sometimes we have to seperate them and deal with them one at a time, but often they overpower us and we need to just find one that gives us strength until we are strong enough to deal with the bigger ones.
    Exelent poem Baby Girl I am Impressed
    ......5/5.....Jim

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