Tear stained paper

by Fire Catches   Nov 18, 2008


Vision blurred, tear stained paper
Wanna go, disappear like vapor
Sad heart, broken mind
Memory's flashing, all re-wind
going numb, not even their
Same for you, but you never cared
Wishing, wishing for ending
Making prayer, hope it's sending
Souls departs or even shatters
but who cares, not them, doesn't matter.

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  • 11 years ago

    by WintersAngel

    I find myself pondering this action everyday.
    Awesome write. 5/5.

  • 15 years ago

    by Lost and Delirious

    I liked it a lot! Even for being short, it was really good...had a punch behind it!
    Good job.
    5/5

    EmoBritboo

  • 15 years ago

    by Bradley Peter

    This piece was good, though I did feel that it weakened as went on. The first two lines were great. A smile literally came across my face because I was so impressed by it. It was a great, unexpected rhyme, and the two lines just flowed perfectly. A really strong start. If you get the rest of this piece to the standard of the first two lines, this piece was be amazing.

    Brad

  • 15 years ago

    by PoetryKnight

    A fly rap, lol. good job, and thanks for the comment. lol. 5/5

  • 15 years ago

    by ForsakenBeautyXx

    Loved this poem. i liked how fast it was. yet you had to read again to just grasp it all. great job!!! 5/5

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