Don't Want You Back

You can tell that when you wrote this you were hurt deep inside, there was one part that seemed weird to me, it just didnt go together and that was

I Will Never Let You Back
Into My Life!!!

other then that I really like it, it's written really well 5/5

I can definitely feel the hurt in the poem. The flow was a little awkward in parts like the two likes:

I will never let you back
into my life

When I read a poem which has no punctuation I usually will pause at the end of each line and when I pause between those two it just comes across as weird. I think you should combine certain lines and maybe use punctuation to help clarify your breaks. But I wont ever tell you that you have to change it or your style. I just give my own opinion. I definitely can understand the feelings expressed in the poem. Keep up the good work.

This one made me smile:)
What a great poem of venting this is!
Good on you, girl!

Hugs,

5/5 Ingrid

Good Job. I would hate to be the person that made you feel these emotions. If they were to read this, I am sure there would be no confusion as to how you feel about them.