Comments : Don't Want You Back

  • 16 years ago

    by Sylvia

    Good Job. I would hate to be the person that made you feel these emotions. If they were to read this, I am sure there would be no confusion as to how you feel about them.

  • 16 years ago

    by Ingrid

    This one made me smile:)
    What a great poem of venting this is!
    Good on you, girl!

    Hugs,

    5/5 Ingrid

  • 16 years ago

    by Lonely Little Dreamer

    I can definitely feel the hurt in the poem. The flow was a little awkward in parts like the two likes:

    I will never let you back
    into my life

    When I read a poem which has no punctuation I usually will pause at the end of each line and when I pause between those two it just comes across as weird. I think you should combine certain lines and maybe use punctuation to help clarify your breaks. But I wont ever tell you that you have to change it or your style. I just give my own opinion. I definitely can understand the feelings expressed in the poem. Keep up the good work.

  • 16 years ago

    by Twisted Mind Broken Soul

    You can tell that when you wrote this you were hurt deep inside, there was one part that seemed weird to me, it just didnt go together and that was

    I Will Never Let You Back
    Into My Life!!!

    other then that I really like it, it's written really well 5/5