by Sylvia
Good Job. I would hate to be the person that made you feel these emotions. If they were to read this, I am sure there would be no confusion as to how you feel about them. |
by Ingrid
This one made me smile:) |
I can definitely feel the hurt in the poem. The flow was a little awkward in parts like the two likes: |
You can tell that when you wrote this you were hurt deep inside, there was one part that seemed weird to me, it just didnt go together and that was |