"No" are what comes out of my mouth
Tears start to swell upon from your eyes
"You think that is going to work on me,
Crying is not going to work this time."
I hate to do this but it better of this way.

That verse really struck a chord with me and your wording is amazing!!

The ending was such a strong ending yet these things really happen and you told it so well. I realise i am raving now but i'm blown away by this!! lol

Well done!!
5/5
Gem x