Comments : Set aside my heart

  • 16 years ago

    by Anthony M

    Nicely put, one can identify with the message. Just some constructive criticism; run the spell checker on the poem as there are few errors that detract from an otherwise nice piece.

  • 16 years ago

    by AlmostLover

    Set aside my heart

    The walls cave in, life is not as it would seem

    Its more like a nightmare, set aside from a dream

    We all get confused, with the right and the wrong

    We live our lives, by the lyrics of our song

    I love this poem haha it is amazingly put!!! my favorite part was placed above.^

    :)

    Kathleen