Hello Beautiful Chaos..
This was such a brilliant piece you penned here !
I absolutely admired the idea of it.

A brilliant white,
Which calls for ink,
That begs to taste,
Words I think.

this stanza is beautifully written, my fave one, truly wonderful, I love it !!!

The rhyme here flowed really perfectly, I think you have no flaws..I love how your flow is never off..you're a great poetess.
I don't know what else to say..your about-life poems always astonish me.
keep up the good work