This emotion called love pushes us sometimes even to the extreme when it came from the heart to the one we reach out for, but being a couple, not just one do things to please the other but both. I like your write and also this topic. Well done, keep it up, kel.

Well that was a pleasant surprise i will admit, not what i expected from a teenager you sound like a sensible level headed young lady intelligent enough to know that you are who comes first (if you dont put yourself first/make yourself happy then you can't make others happy) well done on a very pleasant poem

Grant

Amazing.
That was SO many people's stories in just one poem. I am glad that you came to the realization that you don't need to change for ANYONE. That shows alot of strength. Keep up the amazing work!

XX3 Nia

This one of the absolute best poems I have read! I love how it began and how you ended it. The rhyming was great too. I love your attitude about this guy....I had a similar experience, I also wised up. This is going on my faves definately. 5/5

I love this ! the only two things are that you should never use slang in poetry like Coz , it takes away the beauty . Change it to cause . And if possible , try and make the last two lines rhyme ! it would have such a stronger impact . 5/5

This is one very confusing !! lvoe or hate or both

a thin line btw them no one can know for sure, !!

a word of advice , never totaly change for anyone , who love you , his love will change you , to the better slowly , and you wont even notice !

you uised a lot of simple wording made the poem great to read , and simple to understand the emotion and the flow is great !

very good one!!5/5

A poem with a twist...i really enjoyed the wonderful read...I'm sure a lot of people can relate themself with your poem.

yeah i agree with loverboy do not change yourself for anyone...im sure that special someone will find you and appreciate you for who you are

5/5 from me

Woah! Your poems are awsum! love this one

Ver well written i love it

Althought this poem is wonderfull and i enjoy it and you seem very intrested and into that guy .

but girly , if yuo ask me donjt cahnge for anyone . be your self . either he want you or not . if you change for someont he will love somone other then you . you are not the person he fell in love with !!

\hope that helps other then that it was perfect !