The thing i would change is swap the last to stanzas so the one with the title is the ending : ) |
by Ria
Nice rhyming and a pleasant read! |
I agree with Composed Catastrophe. I loved it though Ash. I was so excited when i realized it said 30 instead of 29 next to your name! beautiful poem. 5/5 |
Wow such a good poem! |
by sexyCheckers
'''I remove all the memories, |
by sexyCheckers
Ps I disagree with the other 2! I think the ending is perfect :) xx |
by Clown
I loved it, its a poem about moving on and about not forgiving the one that hurt u, its great. Moving on is hard, im trying to do it right now, i wish i could do it this easily. but i guess thats the price i pay for a marrage.lol, beautifully written poem and im happy that you moved on from your heartach |