The End of Me

by Brittany C   Nov 18, 2008


As time passes
I see that I am
getting no where
in this so called
life that I am living.

The emptiness
is over powering.
It smothers me
like toxic smoke,
filling my lungs
with disease.

The happiness
is now gone.
My feelings now
numb, unresponsive.
My own body hates me
as it aches constantly.

It is now time
to admit defeat.
My mind is dark
and my heart decaying
as I write this.

So I put the blade
to my soft wrist
and bring an end
to this pathetic
existence.

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  • 16 years ago

    by SH3S fiNAllY H3R3 l0V3 U N3NA

    This was a really good poem. I don't think I could ever write something like this. I really enjoyed. Although, the ending wasn't as good as the rest of the poems. I still enjoyed reading this piece. Good job!

    .:CiiNDY:.

  • 16 years ago

    by Twisted Mind Broken Soul

    This one is incredible, it has very good structure, your feelings were expressed very neatly in this. I can relate to this poem, and I just believe it's a very good piece of yours.

    5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by stillmomsgirl

    This is a very well written, beautiful poem. Well done. 5/5

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