Comments : The End of Me

  • 16 years ago

    by stillmomsgirl

    This is a very well written, beautiful poem. Well done. 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Twisted Mind Broken Soul

    This one is incredible, it has very good structure, your feelings were expressed very neatly in this. I can relate to this poem, and I just believe it's a very good piece of yours.

    5/5

  • This was a really good poem. I don't think I could ever write something like this. I really enjoyed. Although, the ending wasn't as good as the rest of the poems. I still enjoyed reading this piece. Good job!

    .:CiiNDY:.