Wow O.o This is amazing! Wonderful poem this is. I love descriptive words and the emotion in this poem. Very nice vocabulary. Helps picture the story in my head. I see what you mean when you use emotion to pull them into the story. You do wonderful in drawing in the readers attention. I was totally focused into the reading. I loved it a lot! 5/5 Very Amazing Poem.

Very descriptive. I thought it was a nice poem. Not too many grammatical mistakes or problems with your scheme. Overall there isn't much to say. Well done.

Again, beautiful writing style. i like your style of writing<3

Wow... This really is great work... Ur usage of words and excellent description really built a strong imagery in the reader's mind, making them want to read till the very end... :). Each feeling has been described very well... And really, I don't think I have anything more I can say. Excellent Work! :)

5/5
Keep It Up! :)