"I remember a sunny day
You would complain about the heat
So we went outside and turned music on
Slow dancing in the street"
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Interesting use of fire and brimstone, I have never heard it used for romance and love, very creative.

The flow was good ant the message was amazing.

5/5 for creativity

When we kissed we threw the world away

^^ i love this line, jesse. it's so pretty. and like the person above me said, the use of fire and brimstone was so you. hell and damnation association in a love poem...sort of what love is anyway. i got a couple of meanings out of it. *shrugs*

5/5