Delicate flower

by Ingrid   Nov 19, 2008


With infinite care
I cup my hands
holding you within
Soft, peachy tender leaves
of the most delicate pink
My beautiful rose
Humbled by your presence
For once lost for words
Your creations,
a door to your soul
World of vast inner richness
Outstretched lands
of magic and creativeness
My precious flower,
So afraid to crush you
with my thoughtless,
careless hands

A dedication to my beloved Michael Moran.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Sylvia

    When I read this, the first emotions I felt were "softness, gentleness". A beautiful love poem for anyone. Excellent and it is being added to my favorites list so that I can read it over and over again. 5/5 is the most they allow or I would give you more.

  • 16 years ago

    by Grant Gilbert AKA Slash

    Wow Ingrid this is a beautifull expression of how you feel towards a man we all love very much on this site. Very well done and a well earned 5/5

    Grant

  • 16 years ago

    by Brittany C

    I really liked this poem. It was sweet. Everything about it was great. I gave it a 5/5.

  • 16 years ago

    by Mr. Darcy

    ..Now i am lost for words..this maybe the most beautiful love poem that I have ever read..I feel totally embraced by the sincerity of these words and the overwhelmed by the honesty, concentrated into such a compact poem.

    Once again, thank you so much. ((hugs))

  • 16 years ago

    by Ingrid

    ^^ I am touched by the effort you took to comment to me but I am not changing the poem and I will tell you why:

    For once lost for words: I always have an answer to everything. I am the one who always talks, even if no one does. Michael is the first person who is able to render me speechless, just by being himself. So it was not a wrong choice of words on my part.

    Your creations, a door to your soul: Michael is the kind of man who shows his soul through his writings. I get to know him through what he writes.
    His poems are a door through which we can see who he is:)