Half Full or Empty?

Some lines are good some are little forceful. 'One hello means one goodbye'? Really? In what context you said that?

First off thanks for taking time to read my poem.

I love this piece and a lot of people should live by this ;)
there's not much for me to critique as I love it the way it is.

Anticipate the weather,
Remember calm before the storm.
Hope is not belief
Don't count your chickens 'til they're born.
Confide in those you trust
But never ill-inform.

fav lines

I loved this poem and if it were a one round contest you would have won, to be honest. I think that you wrote it flawlessly. The last stanza was a bit off at first, but the actual ending was great. I loved how you did the last two lines in each poem, wonderfully thought out (or just written, haha). "Never think 'Forever' - One 'Hello' means one 'Goodbye'." << Loved those two lines. I think that they're what grabbed my attention. Don't get me wrong the beginning was great, but they were the icing on the cake. Just as the two last lines in each stanza.

Wonderfully written, no actual criticism needed at all. You did an outstanding job.

Very interesting write indeed. Nicely structured as well! keep writing!

Wow... i love the principle of this poem its like you put all the sayings and truths about life in a poem....and i can totally get the aphroism half full or half empty..
wonderfully done its refreshing reading this poem

xHSx