by I love you always and today Nov 19, 2008
category :
Love, romance /
lost love
Here's a story that comes from my heart |
No offense, but the rhyme was not so good. At time, the rhyme does seem to flow, but at other times, it sounds forced. Not all poems need to rhyme. I personally think that poems that do not rhyme yet flow are better than poems that rhyme and not flow. |