A good topic, being out of your comfort zone and how it makes you feel and what response you have to it. If we all thought about the topic, we might learn more about ourselves.

Over all well written but there were a few places that may need a little work. A 5/5 from me. Keep you the good work.

Going through the motion of life, but not really living, (motions or motion)

Feeling so conflicted, not dear (? not daring) to take a hard look at myself and asking the same question, I'm (If I am or Am I) I capable of doing better or would I be happier doing something else

With the recent increase of happiness and comfort surrounded (? surrounding )me

"my inner being asking for an introduction to myself". What a great line!!!

As i have gotten older i have found my inner being is not in touch with myself. Time flies so fast that i find that i have somewhat lost touch with reality and life. Its so hard to put into words for me but you got me thinking alot.

Now you get it why I challenged you? Look for yourself what you have done. Its no less than the bestest poem of yours. In fact you even made the readers think about getting out of their comfort zone.

I had kept the comments for you to be shown on this site. What you have created is something that you wouldnt have created if you had not taken the initiative. This topic was not challenged by me, but you challenged yourself! Be proud of yourself because you are winner all the way. You have successfully compelled everyone to think about themselves.

Lastly, a true winner is not the one who knows her external enemies and defeating them. In fact, a true winner is the one who knows its inner weaknesses and has learnt to conquer it. Hail the Winner!

5/5
Bhavin

This one's a really good one =)
Its a great topic to think about, and so much time can be taken up just thinking a small topic discussed in your poem.
It has left me so much to think about, and I am happy others care for you and have encouraged you to write poems about certain topics/events.
Well done!
keep it up =)
5/5
xox

This poem reveals an esoteric mystical message that promotes spiritual healing

I love this poem; it was filled with inspiration. And I feel like you took the thoughts in my head and put them into a beautiful poem. 5/5

Nice