Until the end of time ( collab with Aureus Argentum)

by Ingrid   Nov 19, 2008


To catch the heart of lovers' poem;
To dig the roots and stretch the skies;
To pray for angels, saints and fathers,
Above a grave, therein, you lie.

From trodden lands to heaven's doorstep,
To count the memories we made,
For that old heart that sings the hyme,
To wrench the path of thy heart's decay.

I vow to hold your hand forever
until the end of time, my love
thorns may cross our paths, so be it
I will not repudiate our bond, my dove

Making memories as we go
Along life's path, souls intertwined
No stronger force than love is there
Your heart in my hands enshrined

Dearest darling, keeper of my heart
I vow to forever be your humble servant
And to live my life in devotion to you
With God as our silent observant

For there the ink sets words to paper,
And lover's gift of choice is done;
Where beauty overlapses time -
"That which is done, cannot be undone".

A collab with my sweet young girlfriend Brianna aka Aureus Argentum.
It was an honor to work with you, my extremely gifted friend!

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  • 16 years ago

    by Bhavin

    An amazing poem. You make the readers feel so comfortable while reading it. It's an amazing word selection. I ll be stupid if i giv u less than 5.

    Regards,
    Bhavin

  • 16 years ago

    by Aureus Argentum

    I'm glad you did it with me. :) Take care!

    Hugs,

    Bri~

  • 16 years ago

    by Sylvia

    Nice writing by both of you. At the end of the first verse I thought the poem would be about the death of a special someone and that thought continued into the second verse. The third verse and those after, the thought shifts to two people in love and their devotion to each other. No matter what happens they will be there for each other until the end of time. Excellent job. 5/5 from me.

  • 16 years ago

    by mandy

    That was very beautiful. Your choice of words was brilliant but soft, and it all flowed together so nicely. 5/5, your a great poet!

    -mandy :)