That was very beautiful. Your choice of words was brilliant but soft, and it all flowed together so nicely. 5/5, your a great poet!

-mandy :)

Nice writing by both of you. At the end of the first verse I thought the poem would be about the death of a special someone and that thought continued into the second verse. The third verse and those after, the thought shifts to two people in love and their devotion to each other. No matter what happens they will be there for each other until the end of time. Excellent job. 5/5 from me.

I'm glad you did it with me. :) Take care!

Hugs,

Bri~

An amazing poem. You make the readers feel so comfortable while reading it. It's an amazing word selection. I ll be stupid if i giv u less than 5.

Regards,
Bhavin