by Yeka
Lovely poem truly wonderful....it's a feeling that every chick wants to have or be at it...great job |
Wow, wonderful write. The flow and structure was fantastic. |
by xxxStarSxxx
*applause* woot! I LOVE this poem. :) |
by Empathy
Flush and wonderfully executed. Love seems to be a very extensive thing for you write about, and you do a very nice job describing it's various forms. The imagery was always precise in my head as I read this poem. I found it to be very enjoyable to read. Nice work. |
by Brittany C
Great poem. I really loved the wording and the picture that it painted in my mind as I read it. What girl wouldn't want something like that =) The flow was very good. The length of the poem was a good one. I almost wish that it was longer. I gave this poem a 5/5. |
by Teria
I really loved this poem. You did an amazing job writing this, and I know it's hard to write love poems. It takes a lot of emotion and such - which is usually what they're lacking. but, this one wasn't. You did a wonderful job. The changes below are mainly dealing with the flow and just minor ones that sound better when reading out loud (and silently as well). |
by Sylvia
Beautiful and romantic. Wonderful to love someone that much and it shows in the words you used to write this poem. Excellent. 5/5 |
by BREEawNUHH
"Droplets of rain fall down upon our bodies, |
You painted such a cute picture! honestly that was adorable i loved it it makes me want a guy that cares about me like that you did an amazing job i hope you won the contest |
by Mr. Darcy
Temps, |
by The Prince
Bloody beautiful. Congratulations on the win! |
by Krista
The beautiful smell of love lingers throughout the air, |
by Nawa
An amazing poem, def. one of my favorites and one of the best I have ever read !! |
by ether
Whoever downvoted this can go suck something not so nice. |
by Cache Logan
Very sweet poem... thank you for sharing you heart with us.... |
Wow, excellent write with so much imagery and feeling within. Your choice of words was simple yet had a deep impact against the reader. The flow was flawless in my opinion as well as the structure. Overall a nice write, Keep up the great writes. |
Too much detail leaves you feeling emotionless and plastic. Detail does not make good poetry, which many people on this site have to learn. Simplicity is bliss. Sorry |
Too much detail leaves you feeling emotionless and plastic. Detail does not make good poetry, which many people on this site have to learn. Simplicity is bliss. Sorry |
Too much detail leaves you feeling emotionless and plastic. Detail does not make good poetry. Simplicity is bliss. Sorry |
by Triumph
I absolutely adored your poem, theres one thing I like more in poems I read then anything, it's a sound visual of what Im reading. |