Comments : Living with the Pain

  • 16 years ago

    by Faithless

    Well you've captured me once again with beautifully written poem...and i believe this poem is about same person...

    You laugh with me, and smile at her.
    My spirit breaks, but it doesn't matter.

    -I can feel the of the false hope that you got

    My friends mean more to me then guys.
    Please believe my stack of lies.

    -It must have be hard for you to put up a false front infront of him...and telling him everything except the truth

    My heart beats faster when you speak my name.
    You hug her tightly, and I hide my shame.

    -I can feel ur heart racing here as there is nothing much that you can do

    overall i think the poem is excellent
    you're really talented indeed
    5/5 from me;)