A name in the sand

by Ingrid   Nov 20, 2008


A name in the sand

There it was,
a name so fine
written upon the sand
Not yet washed away
by the tide
that floods the beach every day
I engraved it upon the sand
A transitory proof
of the feelings I hold for you
On bended knees
I wrote your name
and whispered it to the wind
Overlooking the vast ocean
while the wind fondled my hair
My face directed
to where I know you to be
Seagulls cried as twilight fell
My pace quickened
To return home
Before I lost the light

Written as a response to a well known poem by a well known writer.
This was my choice for the contest:

"One day I wrote her name upon the strand"

by Edmund Spenser (c.1552-1599)

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  • 15 years ago

    by Fran

    Very romantic with a gothic undertone as of a 19th century novel. Beautiful!

  • 15 years ago

    by anand singh

    A very charming and heartwarming piece.
    An enjoyable read.
    Paul...

  • 15 years ago

    by mandy

    What a sweet, and beautiful poem. I really love the ending! 5/5

    mandy :)

  • 16 years ago

    by John Long

    Highly imaginative but very real too. Quite charming and intimate.

  • 16 years ago

    by Grant Gilbert AKA Slash

    Well that sure is a pretty poem Ingrid i love the way you expressed yourself in this one, it was a beautifull worthwhile read.

    Grant