Crystal Tears

This is a sad poem indeed i can feel the deception that you've faced thru the 1st stanza.

It was great how you describe your heart being broken with the metaphor in the second stanza

The hanging ending was a great way to end the poem as the question has yet to be answered

great work
5/5 from me

Ok Sasha i must say i like the concept of this poem and the questions that go along with it.The whole time i was asking myself , does he ? Will he?
Well done and well written

Grant

Wow. this was truely amazing. the sadness of being used came through in this poem very strongly to me.
You mine away leaving a hole in my heart.
Determined to sell my love.

^^ my favourite lines. SO original.
the flow was great i thought, well done.
keep writing :)
5/5

This was a sort of okay poem for me. It wasn't something that blew me away, but it wasn't something that let me down either.

I feel that the flow was off throughout the poem, that you couldn't match the syllables through most of the poem. I felt that it was one of the poems that I was torn about.

I felt that you didn't just use adjectives to describe how the situation was, but rather you described it, I think that is one of the best parts of this poem, it really shows how talented you are when you really exert yourself.

Nicely done.

Sasha,

a liquid form of love, a pricless love, a love so rare that who could actually afford such a treasure..answer, nobody, because it is given freely and cannot be bought, let alone forwarded onto another.

You have managed to create a lovely piece, which flows freely, posses great imagery and leaves the reader with an unanswered question..bravo!

Well done

Michael