I really like this. I didn't get the rhythm and "When you kiss me, does images" should be "When you kiss me, do images. Great poem though. I really got that feeling of hurt!

This is definately filled with so much emotion . I had someone in my mind while i was reading this .. And it really did make me sad . Even though the lines are really long , they don't seem to lose much of their flow . It's kind of strange how only some of the poem rhymes .. But that's minor . 5/5 for sure .