by AngelicDecadence Nov 21, 2008
category :
Miscellaneous /
Misc. poems
She knows what she is and that she cannot stop the change |
by Saving Grace
This doesnt suck! the first few lines immediatly drew me in to keep on reading. Although i do agree with Ablissfuldreamer. Was amazing, but i think the ending stanza could be worked on a bit. But apart from that the wording flowed through perfectly and the rhyme scheme again, was very well written. 5/5 |
by Blissful
I think you used the word "she" too much here. There are places where you could do without it. |
by PlasticSmile
Amazing, and unique(in a good way). You have talent, keep writing <3 |
by Kimberley
This did not suck!!!! i loved it. it was so unique and amazing!! it was written well and had a great flow and story behind it. 5/5 ggod job ~KM~ |
by SashaMirage
This was very unique, I liked it. You were very good in your description and the flow was great. keep it up 5/5 |