Very well written with a very strong message

It's so sad. I love how you wrote a poem about protecting our environment. It's wonderful!

This is an interesting poem, Personally I would have put it under nature, but then people might have downvoted it as it's about the death of nature.

I liked the poem and it potrayed a real life situation that many people do take for granted, it might not be us who has to deal with the effects but there are people.

It's a very good poem.

Because of the damaging gases
That we loss into the air we breathe.

the third wird in the second line should be "lose" I liked the words that you choose and the flow that you used, I don't see anything else that I would put up other than that.

Very well done.

5/5

Wow, this poem was absolutely beautiful. I loved the way you wrote it and the feeling portraied in it. Great job.

.:CiiNDY:.

The lack of rhyme makes it a better read, I think. It's blunt and the enjambment really helps it to have a greater flow. Great work!

Wow this was beautiful and amazing. You really let me stop and think about our environment , and there are many simple things that we can do to help. 5/5

Well, first, I'd like to say FINALLY SOMEONE ELSE NOTICES THIS!! I LOVE that you have noticed how we are destroying the planet.. soon probably ourselves. well, I would like to thank you for writing this so others can NOTICE what we are doing. Bleh. So horrible, (not the poem, us humans) well, good job though, expressing your thoughts.
One thing, the emotion for me was kind of.. gone. Not necessarily bad, just thought you should know.
Good job.
*Chaotic Angel*