Comments : Mona Lisa - A Secret

  • 15 years ago

    by kelleyana

    This is absolutely beautiful, filled with vivid imaginations. You are very talented and you shows this in your writing styles, keep it up, kel.

  • 15 years ago

    by Ingrid

    How very beautiful:)
    I can see you really thought this one out.
    Good usage of words and good rhyming...indeed worthy of a 5/5!
    Nice how you added the story behind it as well:)

    Hugs,

    Ingrid