Soluna

This poem flowed really well, but it lacks depth and the ending could be better.

I loved the poem... It made me think of star wars...and of doctor who... :)
You do actually have a point there... Even if there were battles across the universe, we'd all keep living our lives and rather ignore it...
It is a nice thought...
The poem flows pretty nicely and has an intersting rhyme scheme...
yet I wonder... why did you call it "soluna"?
I mean, it does make sense...
forces of light/dark; day/night; sun/moon (sol/luna in spanish)
But...how did you come to this title?
could also be because of the band...

anyway, it's a wonderful poem
5/5
*isabel*

(you'll tell me how you got to the title, won't you? =D please?)

I really liked this poem. The wording and flow was great. I gave it a 5/5. I saw nothing wrong with anything in this poem.