Floating on Cloud Nine.

by Courageous Dreamer   Nov 22, 2008


Your beautiful words spark butterflies throughout my full heart,
lifting me off the ground into mid air amongst the clouds like an angel,
Love encompasses my soul leaving me speechless with every breath.
My angelic face radiates a smile so permanent, impossible to erase.

Forever, I will hold your hand intertwining my fingers with yours,
they will slip into place like a solved puzzle, a goregeous image.
We will share countless memories in each others arms tight,
and never let go of one another until our very last breath.

Hard times will hover over us, and the sun may not shine everyday,
but do know that our relationship is strong, and we'll make it through.
We'll encounter arguments, numerous tears, and thoughts will become-
confused and mixed at times, but it will only make us stronger.

Every single beat of my heart, signals my love for you,
my love is unique, my love is everlasting, my love never fades...
You entered my life, and instantly set me floating on cloud nine.

[I want you to know that I will always love you.]

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  • 15 years ago

    by Brittany C

    I enjoyed this poem A LOT. It really hits the spot as to how things are in my relationship. I love that boy :) Keep up the great work. I showed my bf this one he agreed that this is a great poem that we both relate too.

  • 15 years ago

    by Brittany C

    Great poem. Again I can really relate to it. I loved the wording and the emotions. The flow was great and I liked the format that you used. I gave this poem a 5/5.

  • 15 years ago

    by Cyber Saiyan

    Not sure what happened to my last comment, but it was missing 90 percent of what I typed.

    Anyway, I really enjoyed the overall flow and the great wording. A few spots could use a review for punctuation, but it was a beautiful poem. I really like that you mention the HARD TIMES WILL HOVER OVER US. This really shows you have a great idea of a mature relationship.

    Great job.

  • 15 years ago

    by Cyber Saiyan

    Of my heart, signals my love

  • 15 years ago

    by Mr. Darcy

    Temps,

    this is the most beautiful prose I have read in such a long time. It is full of love, from every syllable in every word, in every sentence. Love sings from my screen and it sounds so sweet that my eyes fill with the happiness that you have shared with us all.

    I am truely happy that you are so obviously in love. Love is such a profound emotion, one that occupies every single fibre and sinew of a person, so much so that it leaks its saturated love for all to see.

    ((hugs for you Temps))

    Michael

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