I really enjoyed this read. I thought that you pieced the poem together quite well and put just enough emotion in it. I think the biggest problem with it was the commas in that one stanza (mentioned below). Other than that you've a wonderful poem here that's written so nicely.

We will share countless memories in each others arms tight,
and never let go of one another until our very last breath.
[We will share countless memories in each others arms so tightly,
and never let go of one another until our very last breathe.]

** I personally think that the way you had it worded with 'arms tight' was a bit messy. If that's even the word for it. It kind of threw me off while reading. So, I changed it up a bit.

Hard times will hover over us, and the sun may not shine everyday,
[Hard times will hover over us and the sun may not shine everyday.]

** The comma can be used there and probably should be when writing a paper. But, in poetry when you use commas while reading out aloud you have to stop for a split second for them. And, if used in the wrong area it could easily throw off flow, hence; why I changed it.

but do know that our relationship is strong, and we'll make it through.
We'll encounter arguments, numerous tears, and thoughts will become-
confused and mixed at times, but it will only make us stronger.

** I realize this is part of the first line, I'm not going to correct it. But, there's a few extra commas here. you can take and leave as you please because there's some that are needed for the flow's sake and some that aren't. I just figured it could be up to you.

A very beautiful love poem. This line portrays the image of love for me. - "Love encompasses my soul leaving me speechless with every breath." He's a lucky person to have someone that feels this way toward him. Good job.

The emotions expressed with this poem are truly beautiful and I could tell it came straight from the heart. Each scene was easy to imagine in my mind because you described it all nicely. I love how this lifted my mood and just had me smiling throughout. The meaning behind your words were full of power and truly touched me because they were so genuine. I'm sure he loved this beautiful love poem dedicated to him.

I do think there were parts that were cliche and repititive. The flow was a bit rocky throughout and it could use some editing to make it perfect but the emotion and love behind it was truly beautiful so its up to you if you want to change it.

Well done. :]

Temps,

this is the most beautiful prose I have read in such a long time. It is full of love, from every syllable in every word, in every sentence. Love sings from my screen and it sounds so sweet that my eyes fill with the happiness that you have shared with us all.

I am truely happy that you are so obviously in love. Love is such a profound emotion, one that occupies every single fibre and sinew of a person, so much so that it leaks its saturated love for all to see.

((hugs for you Temps))

Michael

Of my heart, signals my love

Not sure what happened to my last comment, but it was missing 90 percent of what I typed.

Anyway, I really enjoyed the overall flow and the great wording. A few spots could use a review for punctuation, but it was a beautiful poem. I really like that you mention the HARD TIMES WILL HOVER OVER US. This really shows you have a great idea of a mature relationship.

Great job.

Great poem. Again I can really relate to it. I loved the wording and the emotions. The flow was great and I liked the format that you used. I gave this poem a 5/5.

I enjoyed this poem A LOT. It really hits the spot as to how things are in my relationship. I love that boy :) Keep up the great work. I showed my bf this one he agreed that this is a great poem that we both relate too.