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by SH3S fiNAllY H3R3 l0V3 U N3NA
I liked it. Kind of short, but it's good. I do have a suggestion though. In the secong stanza, the last line, you wrote: "feels regret for what I've done." would sound better like this: "feels of regret for what I've done." It's just a suggestion though. Good job. 5/5 .:CiiNDY:.