It just so beautiful from beging to end. but this is my favorite part of ur whole beautful poem

I could live without air
I could live without a soul too
I could live without anything
But I can't live without you

it just love it. it says so much to me. and i can live without all that but i cant live without mi lil dork. very well riten here. amzing job. love fills this poem. Keep it up!

TaKe CaRe,
Frenchy

I can tell you that, you'd the power to hypnotized any one by the love your poured out from the heart. Very touching as usual, kel.