by Matthew Schut Nov 22, 2008
category :
Sadness, depression /
lost relationships
People always say the grass is greener on the other side |
Very good. I felt like it perectly captured the desperation. It hit a nerve, that's for sure. Flow was good. Structure was good. 5/5 |
by Alice
Wow nice poem. reminds me of someone in the past. keep it up. |