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by MarkKicher Nov 22, 2008 category : Love, romance / desired love
So sudden its heart pounding, even I couldn't predict its ending. I lose confidence when your around, is this really love I've found? Near are you - but seemed too far, way up just like those tiny celestial stars. but a crave to know you is what I aim, When will I know your name? My feeling is like a steed, lively spirited but also in need. I am in need for your sweet affection, girl, I'm hoping for your selection. A happy ending is my plea, I wish your soft heart too would agree. So this, I announce this day! I will love you! and I will stay. -Kicher s1 mArk-
by Poet on the Piano
"its" should be "it's". and "your" should be "you're". Otherwise, a very sweet piece, I liked the rhyming and simplistic words that meant the most. Thanks for sharing and posting! God bless you and Merry Christmas! ~MaryAnne