by Dark Savior Nov 22, 2008
category :
Sadness, depression /
about death
He sits alone in his room, looking over who he'd choose |
by Jenn
Wow been a while since I've had a chance to get on here and read some of your newer stuff! Still making masterpiece's I see! lol |
by Lady Nik
Wow...*claps for you* This was such a good poem. But also a good story. Each line builds on to the one before it making a very interesting story. This one is my favorite so far. Very detail poem you wrote it. Thanks for sharing :) Nik |
Awwww, this is sad. :[ You did a good job at pulling at emotions. This stuff happens with a lot of families. Good job. |
by Lets Keep it A Surprise
I liked the message of the piece, but I think the scheme of the poem could've been arranged better. |
by Hollymariee
This is really emotional , like almost tear jerking . Very well done . The flow was a little off again , or maybe it's just me , but this one deserves a 5/5 |