by Beautifully Disfigured Nov 23, 2008
category :
Life, society /
inspirational
Preparation |
by Teria
This absolutely followed topic. I would have to say it seems more of a speech than a poem. I think it's the way it flows and it lacks a bit of emotion. The ending is good. And, the meaning is great. But, it's something you would hear a valedictorian say to her/his class. I guess you put it in poem format and that makes it a poem. It is one, it's that simple. But, it lacks emotion. |