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by gracey grey   Nov 23, 2008


Are you there among the bushes
carefree, caring less
oblivious of the drifting scene
reckoning times and figures
Are you frolicking in the hazy maze
knowing not of what is given
but wishing, wanting
Are you happy there, in the land
where night lingers, stars shine
Do you dream with longings to
touch, hold, never let go
Do I exist in recluse of your sanctuary?

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  • 16 years ago

    by Nobodys Hero

    I really enjoyed this little poem, your wording was beautiful and the line you finished on makes the reader question themselves! Really great job! Perfect flow too =]

  • 16 years ago

    by Meena Krish

    This is deep down sad and it leaves the reader with questions to ponder about..a touching write.

  • 16 years ago

    by Grant Gilbert AKA Slash

    Wow what a very sad poem, well it was for me anyway, a very well written poem.
    Also one the that seems to speak of intense longing?
    Well done on a lovely write

    Grant

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