Wow what a very sad poem, well it was for me anyway, a very well written poem.
Also one the that seems to speak of intense longing?
Well done on a lovely write

Grant

This is deep down sad and it leaves the reader with questions to ponder about..a touching write.

I really enjoyed this little poem, your wording was beautiful and the line you finished on makes the reader question themselves! Really great job! Perfect flow too =]