Cheater

by XxXcrystalXcontagiousXxX   Nov 23, 2008


You don't need to
tell me,I already know.
I can hear the whispers
and smell her scent
from a mile away.

Don't explain the
circumstance.Please
don't speak a word
from the wicked.

I don't need your
alibi or your callous
lies.Please don't speak
from the soul of the
devil.I already know
the goal you set as
a trap.

I already know i am
forsaken.If your
asking me to come
back.Forget it i don't need
your crap.

My heart is breaking
like a dead rose.Its beyond
repair and its to much to
bare.

So when you hear the
trigger click,And me fall
to the ground.I hope
you can live with what you
have found.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Teria

    I really enjoyed this poem. I think that where you broke off the lines in some spots is a bit off. So, I do suggest going back through and changing some of it. If you'd like for me to show you how I think the best way for it to be changed then I will, but I think that as a writer you need to do some things yourself. I really think your wording is great the emotion is wonderful. The flow is off though, which goes back to how you're disconnecting your lines through-out the stanzas. A few minor changes and you'll have yourself an amazing poem (it's great already:])

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