I really liked this poem. The wording was great. It was a sad one and it was a good read. I thought that the format could be better. Igave this poem a 5/5.

Try making the lines close to the same length. If you have to break a line down in to 2.

5/5 for you Paula ^^,

it was sad..but still great! like it.
but try to right some love poem(s) try it...

i feel the emotion.and its really strong..

love this stanza

*Blinded by your smile, your warm eyes, the sound of the voice I began to love.
And my heart swelled, strength returned to my battered limbs,
and I began to live and breath joy...*