I liked this poem. The wording was great but it could well with out the "BOOM". Other then that the poem was great and so was everuthing about it. I gave it a 5/5.

This was an excellent write. i love the 'love is gone' concept. your first stanza was my favourite,
As i sit here writing this verse
i can see love riding along in a hearse
heading for the grave dug by my heart
love came and went
ripping my soul apart

^^ i love the love riding along in a hearse.
very imaginative. awesome job.

and overall, it was a brilliant poem. 5/5