Sublime

by Curing the Comon Cliche   Nov 24, 2008


Send something down
I need to be up there with you
Send me something small enough
That makes me better enough to keep holding through

Remembering laying in the snow
I almost wanted to stay til night
The more step away from feeling real
The more I step into feeling alright

Remembering the fireworks
Vodka and cheap wine
I wish I could feel as high as them
Explode and feel sublime

Send something down
I need to be up there with you
I need fireworks enough
To keep me holding through

sublime-
adjective
of such excellence, grandeur, or beauty as to inspire great admiration or awe

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  • 15 years ago

    by StandStill

    This one's really pretty. I like the word choices...jesse, we're going to do the best we can. i promise.

    5/5