Comments : Nature's Lessons

  • 15 years ago

    by Sylvia

    Nature is wonderful and your words have created a beautiful description of spring for me. Now I will count the days until then and I cannot wait. Good work.

  • 15 years ago

    by Sourav

    Well described and nicely structured poem. Very well written.

  • 15 years ago

    by SADADDY

    You awaken the reader’s imagination with your write, thank you for the enjoyable read.

    Sadaddy

  • 15 years ago

    by Meena Krish

    I just love reading about nature and this piece is just a lovely one that makes you smile..very nice. Thank you also for the comment..take care :)

  • 15 years ago

    by Teria

    This is the type of poem that people think punctuation would ruin. If over used it definitely will and I think many people ruined that for everyone. Overusing punctuation, is what I mean.

    A definite upbring from the last poem. Greatly written, flawless is what it seems to be. Great emotion, and everything else it calls for, lol.

  • 15 years ago

    by Good Enough

    This poem was good. i can actualy visualize every word. i love your work keep writing.

  • 15 years ago

    by NyellMoonlight

    This poem made me smile. It's inspiring in so many ways.

    I like your descriptions from the beginning to the end. This poem is truly lovely, so elegant. I usually don't like nature poems, but it's hard to resist the beauty that you painted within just four stanzas. Vividness of every line is amazing.

    Keep up :)

  • 15 years ago

    by sneha

    Beautiful imagery.It is a call to rekindle ones love for nature.excellent write.5